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Far from Gone (Free verse) by Freethinker1602
All I could do was whisper How much I fucking love you I tried so hard not to Hurt either of us Now look where we've gotten to I'm sorry I had to tell you the truth I'm sorry I couldn't tell you What you wanted to hear Hearing you on the phone I can promise you that I'll Always be there tomorrow Some how you won't believe me Though I know the answer I just wish you would Look at my imperfection now See that it slowly fades away How long can I laugh before The tears start to fall Man I wish I still had you If anything else for you I'd have given up Anything I'd have sacrificed my wings of Purity to be able to hug you I'd have sacrificed my forked tongue Just to kiss you I'd sacrifice almost everything I held dear Just to hear you say I love you Now if I never hear it again It's because I did way to good of a job I'll show you next time you want to see What's wrong with me You were what could help me change back Every pain that plagued me Is far from gone Hopefuly you'll see that I am on my way I'm heading back to that girl I used to be

Up the ladder: My Dark Power

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.0
Weighted score: 4.7615943
Overall Rank: 11596
Posted: May 19, 2003 6:30 PM PDT; Last modified: May 19, 2003 6:30 PM PDT
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[5] horus8 @ 24.126.113.154 | 19-May-03/6:48 PM | Reply
Septic, and hopelessly without style, or base.
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