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I LIKE TO HAVE MY HEART ATTACKS ON THURSDAYS (Free verse) by Poetsettle
Three candle flames, one sea-scented, dance along with Boyz to Men singing about boys to men, and, filled with coffee, Cummington's poet observes the steam rising above my body's rage. All these and gifted salts from sister Crystal converge on my senses with one commonality: the poem they form at my feet drifts over scars, and it sings, it rocks, it gentles me.

Up the ladder: Far from Gone
Down the ladder: Suicide

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.0
Weighted score: 4.7615943
Overall Rank: 11602
Posted: May 24, 2003 6:19 PM PDT; Last modified: May 24, 2003 6:19 PM PDT
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