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Liar's Mirror (Free verse) by kassanna
There is a woman
who stalks me
her hair is long and auburn
and each morning
when I turn on the bathroom light
she is there
waiting in the mirror
with her startled face
for the past few years
she has appeared
scrutinizing every line and wrinkled crease
pointing out flaws
leaving her subliminal message
scratched upon
my age defying makup
"delicately worn it says"
she leaves no privacy
to morning rituals
and has become a brazen voyeur
in my secret place
her eager eyes
peel away my gown
leaving my soul naked
stripped of self esteem
Now an accustomed routine
she and I
for a few minutes each day
play this game
for I have found out her secret
age is only an illusion
if you turn on the lights
and look into the liar's mirror
poetrybykassanna
copyright:2003
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Arithmetic Mean: 5.5
Weighted score: 5.134471
Overall Rank: 5560
Posted: May 19, 2003 2:51 PM PDT; Last modified: May 19, 2003 2:51 PM PDT
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Some capitals and punctuation might help also.
Other then that, terribly boring and hopelessly self absorbed. nice job. here's a six.