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This makes no sense (Free verse) by thepinkbunnyofdoom
Donât know why Iâm so upset
I should be happy for you
And Iâm not alone anymore
Donât know what I was hoping for
There is no bridge between the gap
That great divide that we call years
I just donât know why we couldnât look
Just in case?
The Ironic thing about it all
Is that Appearances would have deceived
When I told you my age you didnât believe
Oh how now I wish Iâd lied
Shaved off just 2 years
Youâd have never known
But I thought that you were older
And I had so much fun
Convincing myself that itâd work out
But it never works out, does it?
Didnât think so and now Iâm feeling blue
Hurting cause I know I canât have you
Writing words that have been said a thousand times before
In ways so much better than what Iâm using now
But this is the best that I can do
And I know that I shouldnât be so upset but I am
Why Why Why
Couldnât we try?
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Arithmetic Mean: 7.5
Weighted score: 6.8276463
Overall Rank: 359
Posted: May 8, 2003 5:09 PM PDT; Last modified: May 8, 2003 5:09 PM PDT
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