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This makes no sense (Free verse) by thepinkbunnyofdoom
Don’t know why I’m so upset I should be happy for you And I’m not alone anymore Don’t know what I was hoping for There is no bridge between the gap That great divide that we call years I just don’t know why we couldn’t look Just in case? The Ironic thing about it all Is that Appearances would have deceived When I told you my age you didn’t believe Oh how now I wish I’d lied Shaved off just 2 years You’d have never known But I thought that you were older And I had so much fun Convincing myself that it’d work out But it never works out, does it? Didn’t think so and now I’m feeling blue Hurting cause I know I can’t have you Writing words that have been said a thousand times before In ways so much better than what I’m using now But this is the best that I can do And I know that I shouldn’t be so upset but I am Why Why Why Couldn’t we try?

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