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electric fountain (Free verse) by crin
dancing the two of us in a trance lost inbetween worlds this is a fantasy come true i hear music you are the only instrument in the room i strum i pluck and i listen for every note when i go home i will miss you so it will hurt but its worth the pain and more if i get to keep you let me in and i shall beat upon your skin so softly in rhythm i hear the angels in your breathless whispers a stroke of genius a stroke of luck i'm not sure what it was but there was such a spark

Up the ladder: Recess
Down the ladder: Universal Vigil

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.75
Weighted score: 5.2086053
Overall Rank: 4432
Posted: June 30, 2002 10:31 PM PDT; Last modified: May 6, 2003 11:11 PM PDT
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[7] horus8 @ 24.126.113.154 | 7-May-03/5:00 PM | Reply
handy to keep around for a mediocre date.
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