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electric fountain (Free verse) by crin
dancing
the two of us in a trance
lost inbetween worlds
this is a fantasy come true
i hear music
you are the only instrument
in the room
i strum i pluck
and i listen for every note
when i go home
i will miss you so
it will hurt
but its worth the pain and more
if i get to keep you
let me in
and i shall beat upon your skin
so softly in rhythm
i hear the angels in your
breathless whispers
a stroke of genius
a stroke of luck
i'm not sure what it was
but there was
such a spark
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Arithmetic Mean: 6.75
Weighted score: 5.2086053
Overall Rank: 4432
Posted: June 30, 2002 10:31 PM PDT; Last modified: May 6, 2003 11:11 PM PDT
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