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I wish... (Free verse) by Jai I wish I could take back the mistakes I made,
I wish we could laugh and have fun like we used too,
I wish you could see how much I care for you,
I wish you would realize that I am the one for you,
I wish you could want me as much as I want you,
I wish my wish would come true.
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Loud Taps
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Lost Soul
Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
Arithmetic Mean: 3.2857144
Posted: May 7, 2003 5:31 PM PDT; Last modified: May 7, 2003 5:31 PM PDTWeighted score: 4.5389576 Overall Rank: 12717 Comments:
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horus8 @ 24.126.113.154
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7-May-03/7:20 PM
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Honestly? I enjoyed very much how you rhymed too with three you's, but then, finished off with a true. Staggering, and very suspenseful. I'll raise you one zero blue vote, and see you a green one.
I wish I could break your face.
i get it completely, simple though
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