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I wish... (Free verse) by Jai

I wish I could take back the mistakes I made, I wish we could laugh and have fun like we used too, I wish you could see how much I care for you, I wish you would realize that I am the one for you, I wish you could want me as much as I want you, I wish my wish would come true.

horus8 7-May-03/7:20 PM
Honestly? I enjoyed very much how you rhymed too with three you's, but then, finished off with a true. Staggering, and very suspenseful. I'll raise you one zero blue vote, and see you a green one.




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