poemranker ::20 most recent comments by horus8 (121-140) and replies

Comments byhorus8, 121–140 back, including replies. Only comments on poems

on Scar Gazing by thepinkbunnyofdoom 22 Sep 2004, 3:59 PM
A grammaric nightmare, but there's some salvagable stuff in there, somewhere.
on ONCE(revised) by jroday 22 Sep 2004, 3:54 PM
A quartered pine nut.
on Ghost by Caducus 22 Sep 2004, 3:42 PM
The end fell apart for me, but the beginning was really good stuff.
replying on Nightshades by Bachus 17 Sep 2004, 10:50 PM
The same reason you do.
on Play by Lifeboatman 17 Sep 2004, 10:44 PM
Vivid, and pleasantly wicked. -=10=-
replying on AIDS in a Doug by horus8 17 Sep 2004, 10:30 PM
Way to sand bag Doug! But I thought we had moved past calling eachother "turds" When I anti'd up with a lapsnorkle to go with your asshat? Must you BE SOooo rhetorical? It really takes the fun out of bashing you to fodder with my higher intellect, and better equiped wit... Besides, we all know you're the HOMERUN OF SHIT Doug -- you fucking bespackled troglidyte. You can't write. You're a jealous bitch, and a punk ass-ho, deal with it. I'd fucking kick your ass, and I'm blind and gay!!!
on o, whale by A. Nomaly 16 Sep 2004, 10:58 PM
Fucketti, soused
replying on The Serpent People by horus8 16 Sep 2004, 4:38 PM
I know.
on Welsh Landscape Part One by Nicholas Jones 16 Sep 2004, 4:23 PM
Amazing.
on A Kiss Beneath The Blossom Tree by Caducus 16 Sep 2004, 4:06 PM
I'm a jelly guy.
replying on Coward has a tail by LintyWeenis 16 Sep 2004, 3:42 PM
undoubtedly
on Blind Settlement by Blindpoetry 16 Sep 2004, 11:24 AM
A vintage fender amp with pint stains.
on C. Morgenstern: Gentle Songs by yonderland 16 Sep 2004, 11:21 AM
Heavy...
on Addicted by berdabear 16 Sep 2004, 11:15 AM
A bearded dildo crushing the sun.
on Overheard in a crypt: by fevriere 15 Sep 2004, 11:23 AM
Romeo and Juliet.
replying on Lord Byron Gave Mary Her Shelly by horus8 15 Sep 2004, 11:21 AM
Yes, I know


It means that she made Frankenstein before
becoming a wife, a mother, or real herself.
And that it was her will that brought it all about,
that being the whole of the law "do as thou whilst".

-- Alister Crowley
on Corner of 30th and Tibbs by klosterfobik 14 Sep 2004, 11:49 PM
And I have loads more, say when.
on Inquietude by klosterfobik 14 Sep 2004, 11:48 PM
And there you go.
replying on Penumbra by klosterfobik 14 Sep 2004, 11:47 PM
It's more like... When did he imply you did? fuckwad.
on Eagledale Drive by klosterfobik 14 Sep 2004, 11:45 PM
Let it rain!