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Overheard in a crypt:

by fevriere

Member since 2004 · Posted 14 Sep 2004 · 3 comments

"Here's a potion to heal our divide (our twoness, our broken flesh) like a champagne toast to the grave. Steal a thirsty kiss- Lick it off my lips-" What a thirst this is! And what a kiss.

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[9] horus8 15-Sep-04/11:23 AM Reply
Romeo and Juliet.
[8] edpeterson 16-Sep-04/9:18 AM Reply
starsky and hutch
[n/a] fevriere › edpeterson 16-Sep-04/12:22 PM Reply
Kylie and jason, actually.