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Emotions Color Your Thoughts (Free verse) by cuddlytiger17 Emotions color your thoughts
Shades of rage, jealousy, depression
Entwining, circling one another
Fusing, flowing simultaneously
Fabricating an obscure rainbow
Seen through a cloudy day.
Skies of red, green, blue
Fading together,
Forming an intricate
Vision of another life;
Free of three-dimensional logic.
Up the ladder:
The Angle of your Downfall
Down the ladder:
The Way of Monsters
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Posted: November 26, 2004 8:14 PM PST; Last modified: November 26, 2004 8:14 PM PSTWeighted score: 5.119203 Overall Rank: 5770 Comments:
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Dovina @ 69.175.6.101
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27-Nov-04/2:51 PM
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It starts out on a good path, but wanders into netherland, losing focus.
Beautiful... what colour is hope?
Thank you. And I have no idea. If I figure it out, I'll let you know. :p
Please do. But until you find out, I'd like to think that the colour of hope is love. What do you think?
I think you can make it whatever "colour" you'd like.
That's the way.
I like it because of it's final line. Three dimensional logic is fuckin restrictive, and nothing will cause you more heart ache. Hope is fleeting, happiness fleeting, glory fleeting.. but we can have the time of our lives chasing them down. This is and "we are".
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