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Emotions Color Your Thoughts (Free verse) by cuddlytiger17

Emotions color your thoughts Shades of rage, jealousy, depression Entwining, circling one another Fusing, flowing simultaneously Fabricating an obscure rainbow Seen through a cloudy day. Skies of red, green, blue Fading together, Forming an intricate Vision of another life; Free of three-dimensional logic.

Crakyamuni 3-Jan-05/4:01 PM
I like it because of it's final line. Three dimensional logic is fuckin restrictive, and nothing will cause you more heart ache. Hope is fleeting, happiness fleeting, glory fleeting.. but we can have the time of our lives chasing them down. This is and "we are".




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