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Emotions Color Your Thoughts (Free verse) by cuddlytiger17

Emotions color your thoughts Shades of rage, jealousy, depression Entwining, circling one another Fusing, flowing simultaneously Fabricating an obscure rainbow Seen through a cloudy day. Skies of red, green, blue Fading together, Forming an intricate Vision of another life; Free of three-dimensional logic.

Dovina 27-Nov-04/2:51 PM
It starts out on a good path, but wanders into netherland, losing focus.




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