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Play (Free verse) by Lifeboatman pike in the mementos of your misfotune
in a fortune cookie that's
rancid and cracked in the middle
I tell you, until you do
I will piss on the very idea of you
And kiss you every night before I sleep
Up the ladder:
soft candy
Down the ladder:
Nostalgias?
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Posted: September 16, 2004 11:23 PM PDT; Last modified: September 16, 2004 11:23 PM PDTWeighted score: 5.0 Overall Rank: 8065 Comments:
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horus8 @ 24.130.62.63
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17-Sep-04/10:44 PM
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Vivid, and pleasantly wicked. -=10=-
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Lifeboatman @ 210.213.184.72
> horus8
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19-Oct-04/9:43 AM
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thanks...
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