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Play (Free verse) by Lifeboatman
pike in the mementos of your misfotune in a fortune cookie that's rancid and cracked in the middle I tell you, until you do I will piss on the very idea of you And kiss you every night before I sleep

Down the ladder: The Wandering Jew

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.0
Weighted score: 5.0
Overall Rank: 8031
Posted: September 16, 2004 11:23 PM PDT; Last modified: September 16, 2004 11:23 PM PDT
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[10] horus8 @ 24.130.62.63 | 17-Sep-04/10:44 PM | Reply
Vivid, and pleasantly wicked. -=10=-
[n/a] Lifeboatman @ 210.213.184.72 > horus8 | 19-Oct-04/9:43 AM | Reply
thanks...
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