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Member since 2003 · Posted 16 Sep 2004 · 2 comments

pike in the mementos of your misfotune in a fortune cookie that's rancid and cracked in the middle I tell you, until you do I will piss on the very idea of you And kiss you every night before I sleep

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[10] horus8 17-Sep-04/10:44 PM Reply
Vivid, and pleasantly wicked. -=10=-
[n/a] Lifeboatman › horus8 19-Oct-04/9:43 AM Reply
thanks...