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Night (Free verse) by storyspinner
Beneath the crown of night I lie
Still and cradled in the dark
Breezes drift across my skin
The landscape is solemn and stark
The whole world holds its breath
When the shadows come
And you can feel the very sky
Begin to shift and hum
The night comes crawling slowly
On feet so dark and cold
That all the lonely go scrambling
For someone close to hold
But feel in me the darkness
It shines with its own light
Radiant and softly flowing
I am in love with the night
Blanket me, and fill me
Send shadows across my skin
Breathe in me your deepness
Bring the night within
Shadows creep across the sky
Leaving the world to wonder why
They watch the daylight flashing by
But I am still â and here I lie.
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Arithmetic Mean: 5.0
Weighted score: 5.0
Overall Rank: 8070
Posted: April 14, 2005 6:18 PM PDT; Last modified: April 14, 2005 6:18 PM PDT
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