| Re: Coldfront by klosterfobik |
14-Sep-04/11:43 PM |
Just thought I'd come by and say hi motherfucker,
"hi motherfucker".
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| Re: staring contest by FreeFormFixation |
14-Sep-04/11:35 PM |
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| Re: Keep Your Mouth Shut and Your Gun Loaded by wilco |
14-Sep-04/11:34 PM |
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| Re: Grandpa's boat by Caducus |
14-Sep-04/11:23 PM |
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| Re: a comment on Milkshake until beef jerky by horus8 |
14-Sep-04/11:20 PM |
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| Re: a comment on Mike Pike!! by DR Limerick |
14-Sep-04/11:17 PM |
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You have the wit of a fur-seal.
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| Re: a comment on Lord Byron Gave Mary Her Shelly by horus8 |
12-Sep-04/2:00 PM |
How inventive... I'm really impressed with how imaginative you've become. Why you feel the need to carry on your pitiful
attempts at witt and wry humor at your own expense of sounding
utterly retarded is quite bold, carry on.
Also, I'm not self published.
You can buy my book on Amazon
it's called Juno's Peacock
knock yourself out.
I'm sorry it has to be this way,
but I've never really been into
you or your writing, and this latest attempt
at love on your part makes me feel uncomfortable,
please forgive me, but I can't see you anymore.
As for my mother... Dead, my children... Beautiful
and on my lap, eternally.
Now go fuck yourself eskimo.
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| Re: A Strenuous Recollection by Doug |
11-Sep-04/2:17 PM |
I've seen mooseknuckles with more style and flair.
This is just bad writing, but with emphasis on
what it's like to be black, poor, and in a dress.
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| Re: The Gray Idea by Doug |
11-Sep-04/2:16 PM |
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A shit sandwich, hold the bread.
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| Re: School 61 by unnesessary |
11-Sep-04/2:14 PM |
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| Re: Lost Soul by ChefKSP |
9-Sep-04/9:32 PM |
Fucketti Surprise!!! the surprise is
a herd of turds parked in your mouth piece.
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| Re: Night High by LintyWeenis |
9-Sep-04/9:30 PM |
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Moist, but dry at the end.
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| Re: Coldfront by klosterfobik |
9-Sep-04/9:28 PM |
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| Re: a comment on The Fog And The Androids by Shardik |
9-Sep-04/9:24 PM |
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It's a lovesong MOTHERFUCKER. lol
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| Re: a comment on Isadora by avery |
6-Sep-04/12:03 PM |
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Lol!!! Brilliant!!! -=01=-
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| Re: Isadora by avery |
6-Sep-04/12:02 PM |
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Good Christ; what a flat warm beer that was.
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| Re: a comment on Edges by Blue Magpie |
6-Sep-04/12:00 PM |
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This is easilly the wisest thing you've ever tooted.
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| Re: Edges by Blue Magpie |
6-Sep-04/11:59 AM |
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God...Long, boring and crammed full of angel cocca.
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| Re: Awakened Dream by Faulk |
5-Sep-04/8:06 PM |
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| Re: On Being Born by emilyowey |
4-Sep-04/10:29 PM |
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This is quite possibly the saddest, and most precise poem I've ever read. I am so sorry.
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