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Awakened Dream (Lyric) by Faulk
A whisper soft and heavenly fair Awakes me from my slumber there A wise and gentle song does play To keep me from my dreams that day Two voices quick, resume to talk They lead me on my long cold walk I ask them, “Whence do we now go?” They only reply, “We do not know.”

Up the ladder: dreamer
Down the ladder: Buried

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.4
Weighted score: 5.0476813
Overall Rank: 6879
Posted: September 4, 2004 11:34 PM PDT; Last modified: September 4, 2004 11:34 PM PDT
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[8] horus8 @ 24.130.62.63 | 5-Sep-04/8:06 PM | Reply
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[5] New Life Drug @ 69.106.226.24 | 6-Sep-04/12:42 AM | Reply
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