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Loneliness, Grief, and Other Emotions (Free verse) by MacFrantic A host of inhibitions I
The drought of the longest day soon ends
This feeling to stray remains
As only sin itself am I
A caustic breath of saturation
Bound by rain of a different color
Moon of sorrow waxing I
Copper heart beneath the sky
Emaciated conscience choking
Approaching vanity never I
Such a solemn foothold of apprehension
To speak to a wall and receive yourself
Up the ladder:
The Marble Me
Down the ladder:
Waiting to live
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Posted: April 9, 2004 11:53 AM PDT; Last modified: April 9, 2004 11:53 AM PDTWeighted score: 5.0476813 Overall Rank: 6873 Comments:
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9-Apr-04/12:06 PM
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I think you are playing around with poets who speak constantly of sadness. I hope so! If I knew so, I would give a 10.
such riddles.
That "I" construct is almost workin'
such riddles.
That "I" construct is almost workin' 203 view(s)
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