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Loneliness, Grief, and Other Emotions (Free verse) by MacFrantic

A host of inhibitions I The drought of the longest day soon ends This feeling to stray remains As only sin itself am I A caustic breath of saturation Bound by rain of a different color Moon of sorrow waxing I Copper heart beneath the sky Emaciated conscience choking Approaching vanity never I Such a solemn foothold of apprehension To speak to a wall and receive yourself

hypatia 9-Apr-04/12:06 PM
I think you are playing around with poets who speak constantly of sadness. I hope so! If I knew so, I would give a 10.




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