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Isadora (Acrostic) by avery
I took her head into my arms Sedated by the scent of her deadly charm An answer to my prayer Did He send her to me Or is it just self-deception Roses rain and fall into the lake And yet I still wish I would never wake Whencesoever did she sprout out from? A glance was all she took to capture my heart Night after night I dream of her fleeting smile Green some may say; yet I'm not the type to sway Zany and whacky she seems Her temper sweet then steaming Entertaining her would seem a feat Nonetheless I would compete Golden skin shining in the sunlight Her toned body perfect; in all rights Unconditionally I'll give her my all I love you; I'll be there whenever you call

Up the ladder: The Feeling Is Mutual
Down the ladder: The Way

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.75
Weighted score: 4.9327645
Overall Rank: 9140
Posted: September 5, 2004 1:10 AM PDT; Last modified: September 5, 2004 1:10 AM PDT
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Comments:
[10] sliver @ 63.190.72.100 | 5-Sep-04/5:10 PM | Reply
What is wang zhenghui?
[n/a] avery @ 202.156.2.130 > sliver | 5-Sep-04/9:15 PM | Reply
The full name. She's a Chinese.
[10] sliver @ 63.190.72.34 > avery | 6-Sep-04/7:32 AM | Reply
Then I gine you a ten. I wrote one of these last night and now I see how difficult it is. Read mine and tell me what you think?
[5] horus8 @ 24.130.62.63 > avery | 6-Sep-04/12:03 PM | Reply
Lol!!! Brilliant!!! -=01=-
[5] horus8 @ 24.130.62.63 | 6-Sep-04/12:02 PM | Reply
Good Christ; what a flat warm beer that was.
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