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Isadora

Member since 2004 · Posted 5 Sep 2004 · 5 comments

I took her head into my arms Sedated by the scent of her deadly charm An answer to my prayer Did He send her to me Or is it just self-deception Roses rain and fall into the lake And yet I still wish I would never wake Whencesoever did she sprout out from? A glance was all she took to capture my heart Night after night I dream of her fleeting smile Green some may say; yet I'm not the type to sway Zany and whacky she seems Her temper sweet then steaming Entertaining her would seem a feat Nonetheless I would compete Golden skin shining in the sunlight Her toned body perfect; in all rights Unconditionally I'll give her my all I love you; I'll be there whenever you call

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5 comments

[10] sliver 5-Sep-04/5:10 PM Reply
What is wang zhenghui?
[n/a] avery › sliver 5-Sep-04/9:15 PM Reply
The full name. She's a Chinese.
[10] sliver › avery 6-Sep-04/7:32 AM Reply
Then I gine you a ten. I wrote one of these last night and now I see how difficult it is. Read mine and tell me what you think?
[5] horus8 › avery 6-Sep-04/12:03 PM Reply
Lol!!! Brilliant!!! -=01=-
[5] horus8 6-Sep-04/12:02 PM Reply
Good Christ; what a flat warm beer that was.