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Isadora (Acrostic) by avery

I took her head into my arms Sedated by the scent of her deadly charm An answer to my prayer Did He send her to me Or is it just self-deception Roses rain and fall into the lake And yet I still wish I would never wake Whencesoever did she sprout out from? A glance was all she took to capture my heart Night after night I dream of her fleeting smile Green some may say; yet I'm not the type to sway Zany and whacky she seems Her temper sweet then steaming Entertaining her would seem a feat Nonetheless I would compete Golden skin shining in the sunlight Her toned body perfect; in all rights Unconditionally I'll give her my all I love you; I'll be there whenever you call

sliver 6-Sep-04/7:32 AM
Then I gine you a ten. I wrote one of these last night and now I see how difficult it is. Read mine and tell me what you think?




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