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Blind Settlement (Free verse) by Blindpoetry
Every single time I rhyme You get to me This obliverating mind of mine Grows and incompletes Everytime we're eating We're conceiving We're supposed to be at the family meeting You cry to me; we need more counciling You say your bleeding You say your crying You say what a script says You really are leaving And we just might be friends Don't wait for the colors to collide For us to divide Make a choice; Don't wait Make a choice; Make me die I Just Hate This Blind Settlement

Up the ladder: Cock O Croo
Down the ladder: colourful cavalcade

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.75
Weighted score: 5.089402
Overall Rank: 6331
Posted: September 15, 2004 6:20 PM PDT; Last modified: September 15, 2004 6:20 PM PDT
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[10] horus8 @ 24.130.62.63 | 16-Sep-04/11:24 AM | Reply
A vintage fender amp with pint stains.
[3] cheese.doodles @ 70.52.170.79 | 15-Mar-07/10:15 AM | Reply
I just hate your poetry.
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