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Penumbra (Free verse) by klosterfobik
At last you've come,
(with something of a subtle grace)
O' obscurity that smile on your face,
now lacks love.
From a distance
I hear the sojourn of the wind,
it speaks of our end -
as if its known all along.
This night the stoic moon
shares it's lonely glow
as if it also knows -
this night our joining's severed.
And all the stars dim to sorrow,
mourning the murder of our love,
one falls below from above -
a symbol of our parting.
And her lips touched mine,
but for a moment of bliss,
one sweet mortal kiss -
then she passed like a clandestine comet.
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Arithmetic Mean: 4.3125
Weighted score: 4.394452
Overall Rank: 12999
Posted: August 15, 2004 4:18 PM PDT; Last modified: August 24, 2004 3:52 PM PDT
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very milk-fed pedomorphic oxymoron.Why,oh why do Brits still bother to speak - that is redundant - even more so than a mid-month jam rag - you sad little cynic.