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Addicted (Free verse) by berdabear
Addicted, unobstructed by necessity.
My world catches fire in your eyes
a warming flame filling my soul with adoration
and then a touch as light as air ignites my body
I watched your hands upon my skin,
such power
restrained by breathtaking passion
exploring every solitary inch
I can still feel your gaze upon my breast
in one moment I felt I would explode
that I had reached the farthest expanses of heaven
you entered me and I swallowed you whole
engulfed and surrounded you
Iâve kept you inside of me to feel you every day
when the moment that I miss you
your love comes deep inside to comfort and caress me
If never you may fill me again
Iâll take your kiss and tender gaze
to the moment we were one
and with it your love from life to life
for eternity
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Arithmetic Mean: 7.571429
Weighted score: 5.6915636
Overall Rank: 1986
Posted: September 16, 2004 9:56 AM PDT; Last modified: September 16, 2004 9:56 AM PDT
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