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Addicted (Free verse) by berdabear
Addicted, unobstructed by necessity. My world catches fire in your eyes a warming flame filling my soul with adoration and then a touch as light as air ignites my body I watched your hands upon my skin, such power restrained by breathtaking passion exploring every solitary inch I can still feel your gaze upon my breast in one moment I felt I would explode that I had reached the farthest expanses of heaven you entered me and I swallowed you whole engulfed and surrounded you I’ve kept you inside of me to feel you every day when the moment that I miss you your love comes deep inside to comfort and caress me If never you may fill me again I’ll take your kiss and tender gaze to the moment we were one and with it your love from life to life for eternity

Up the ladder: The conflict begin
Down the ladder: I Really Don't Care

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Arithmetic Mean: 7.571429
Weighted score: 5.6915636
Overall Rank: 1985
Posted: September 16, 2004 9:56 AM PDT; Last modified: September 16, 2004 9:56 AM PDT
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[n/a] horus8 @ 24.130.62.63 | 16-Sep-04/11:15 AM | Reply
A bearded dildo crushing the sun.
[10] NoSage @ 63.190.64.245 | 17-Sep-04/8:11 AM | Reply
Mmmmm Mmmmm Mmmmm
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