Re: a comment on The spleenless poet by Bachus	27-Jul-03/12:48 PM
Look psycho I wrote this poem to settle 6 months ago, and just did an edit recently, please, don't get paranoid on me.
Re: a comment on Ode to a Fox Cub by http://mulberryfairy	27-Jul-03/12:30 PM
Do we? I believe you have me confused for someone else, but fine, if you believe that more power to you. I could of sworn that's always been my argument against certain poemranker crowds, but if you want the platform now, be my guest. I'm saying this 'piece' of poetry could be tightened, compressed and shortened, and lose nothing but it's redundant wordiness, whether there are fucking idiots on poemranker swimming in feces, or suffering from milking farm animals with the attention span of a ripe squash. All poetry can always use a good edit. Spare me your need to drag the poemranker argument into my observation of your wonderful piece. It makes me like you less for being that easilly unfocused, and I was really getting to like you quite a bit. For instance "starving scavengers" Scavengers are always starving hence why they scavenge, therefore lose starving. You have twenty examples of this type of redundant wordiness in your poem. And the shape and structure of the piece, is ugly, and could use an editor was all I was saying, said, because, I like the poem and care.
Re: Choices by INTRANSIT	27-Jul-03/11:46 AM
Better than inside out underwear.
Re: Escape is an Unaffordable luxury by Freethinker1602	26-Jul-03/12:52 PM
Yes, as Bachus would say "Nice fucking socks" Now, off to throw tissue, good day.
Re: Curse fait by Freethinker1602	26-Jul-03/12:33 PM
A prostitute with a wooden clitoris, and ah... on ahhh, oh! on GHP, right? I'm getting closer though? Right? I think so, this is fun, it's better than that movie the Cell. And that's all that matters. It's like a scavenger hunt with that guy from slingblade "Not funny gay ha ha, funny queer, hmm ha.".
Re: a comment on Birth in the Valley of Liquor by horus8	26-Jul-03/12:22 PM
A decade ago, want to hear it? There's two versions at gangbox.com under mp3,'s
Re: Equality by Freethinker1602	26-Jul-03/11:41 AM
You need to shut up and suck my Rodzilla.
Re: The Sadistic Mirth by Freethinker1602	26-Jul-03/11:38 AM
An opera for the bolemic.
Re: Amelioration is only relative by Freethinker1602	26-Jul-03/1:37 AM
Death by popcorn.
Re: a comment on close to wonderland by crwncka1	25-Jul-03/10:57 PM
This clearly redefines the pimple poem, you're a pioneer. I believe you can do much worse and will.
Re: tower of pain by crwncka1	25-Jul-03/10:05 PM
The curse of the meacock.
Re: neverland by crwncka1	25-Jul-03/9:59 PM
Amazing, it's like a maze through down syndrome.
Re: close to wonderland by crwncka1	25-Jul-03/9:39 PM
My friend, you be-ake a fine turdloaf. You are the worst poet alive by far. This poem is a gag.
Re: death of devil XIII by crwncka1	25-Jul-03/9:36 PM
And to think my sherbert melted a bit to read this nonsense.
Re: Two sides of Broken trust by DeadtotheWorld	25-Jul-03/9:32 PM
Oh lord, I better put my galoshes on, it's getting deep in here.
Re: a comment on Upon a falling bar stool (Free for all) by PluckyHoe by horus8	24-Jul-03/4:09 PM
And, there is no such thing as small, rest assured.
Re: a comment on Upon a falling bar stool (Free for all) by PluckyHoe by horus8	24-Jul-03/4:09 PM
Your sense of humor will eventually improve your writing dramatically.
Re: Ranting Drunkard by Don-Quixote	24-Jul-03/2:05 PM
Good lord, Try Absynthe and quit moanin'. A poet chirping about drinking... what are you? from Salt lake city?
Re: Do Swans Get Jealous? (#2) by Christof	24-Jul-03/1:47 PM
Always the observant one aren't we.
Re: A Fine Day To Exit by OnTheOtherHand	24-Jul-03/1:43 PM
Fear, is what they made it to be, not you. Let the boy out to play. Vitamin D, is God's juice man, it will work.