|
|
Do Swans Get Jealous? (#2) (Free verse) by Christof
As I sit eating my bagel by the tourists in the park
A sunning swan slips past all arch
From neck to breast to wing to tail
Pert in her bodice of sleek and white.
The hot eyes follow
Till a rubbish-truck arrives
When a boy, not seven, in a shirt of livid green
Pats through the flowers to interrogate the dustman
And the eyes follow
The dustman
Red-faced in the heat, jawing with the grinning boy
Pointing at the panting garbage heap.
As I sit, the tourists laughing in their swelter,
The sorbet white of the swan's intent
Ebbs away with the shrug of one
Who has too late noticed the sun's dark sweat.
Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
| Graph | Votes |
10 |
|
1 | 0 |
9 |
|
1 | 0 |
8 |
|
4 | 0 |
7 |
|
3 | 1 |
6 |
|
0 | 0 |
5 |
|
0 | 0 |
4 |
|
0 | 0 |
3 |
|
0 | 1 |
2 |
|
0 | 0 |
1 |
|
0 | 0 |
0 |
|
2 | 1 |
|
Arithmetic Mean: 5.857143
Weighted score: 5.6266217
Overall Rank: 2213
Posted: September 3, 2002 8:37 AM PDT; Last modified: September 3, 2002 8:37 AM PDT
View voting details
Comments:
277 view(s)
|