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Free verse № 18682

Untitled

by LucidRevelation

Member since 2002 · Posted 3 Oct 2002 · 5 comments

Jealously reeks of cruel intentions. It oozes through crevices you didn't know you had subsiding until it's unbearable unbeatable indescribable. It's vapors unseen undetected until it seeps into one disastrous pile of hatred. Like a monster it waits in the shadows for it's next victim.

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5 comments

[7] cleverdevice 22-Oct-02/5:08 AM Reply
Very dark. Very effective, Well done.
[8] -=SeTTle=- 27-Oct-02/7:01 PM Reply
gsdjkdsl;sdljfkjfsd not bad
[8] Owner of the Sky 7-Jan-03/10:47 AM Reply
OK... WHAT brought this one on Hardcore? O.o
[6] [mojo] 3-Feb-03/3:25 PM Reply
Interesting structure. 6.
[n/a] <~> 3-Feb-03/3:52 PM Reply
yep. mind is the culprit again.