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Untitled (Free verse) by LucidRevelation Jealously reeks
of cruel intentions.
It oozes
through
crevices
you didn't know
you had
subsiding
until
it's unbearable
unbeatable
indescribable.
It's vapors
unseen
undetected
until
it seeps into
one
disastrous
pile
of hatred.
Like a monster
it waits
in the shadows
for it's next
victim.
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Posted: October 3, 2002 5:03 PM PDT; Last modified: October 3, 2002 5:03 PM PDTWeighted score: 5.6266217 Overall Rank: 2214 Comments:
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cleverdevice @ 212.219.142.161
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22-Oct-02/5:08 AM
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Very dark. Very effective, Well done.
gsdjkdsl;sdljfkjfsd not bad
OK... WHAT brought this one on Hardcore? O.o
Interesting structure. 6.
yep. mind is the culprit again.
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