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Conversation with a Clock III (Haiku) by morffrom No,your spring has sprung,
you've come undone now I have,
no one to talk to
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Posted: September 26, 2002 7:35 AM PDT; Last modified: September 26, 2002 7:35 AM PDTWeighted score: 5.624918 Overall Rank: 2215 Comments:
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Christof @ 195.172.133.226
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26-Sep-02/7:37 AM
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Thank God. Now you can get out at talk to people. Or at least to the birds or soemthing.
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morffrom @ 213.1.165.86
> Christof
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26-Sep-02/9:35 AM
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ok lets talk- too great loquacity and too great taciturnity by fits- I thank you for your vote, I intend running or at least walking for Prime Minister or President as Blair seems to think he is one
hahahaha!
z - glad it made you laugh or is somene tickling you ?
compact and clever
I agree with Christof you need to get out more, strike a balance between talking to objects and talking to objectionable people
Not sure this works, prbably because the spring is no longer in
nice ending
at's almost sad, but the "spring has spring" soiunds cliche or sing-songy, taking away from a mood that might surface from underneath.
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