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Conversation with a Clock III

by morffrom

Member since 2002 · Posted 26 Sep 2002 · 9 comments

No,your spring has sprung, you've come undone now I have, no one to talk to ..................

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9 comments

[8] Christof 26-Sep-02/7:37 AM Reply
Thank God. Now you can get out at talk to people. Or at least to the birds or soemthing.
[n/a] morffrom › Christof 26-Sep-02/9:35 AM Reply
ok lets talk- too great loquacity and too great taciturnity by fits- I thank you for your vote, I intend running or at least walking for Prime Minister or President as Blair seems to think he is one
[8] <~> 26-Sep-02/7:39 AM Reply
hahahaha!
[n/a] morffrom › <~> 26-Sep-02/9:35 AM Reply
z - glad it made you laugh or is somene tickling you ?
[4] bondjedi 26-Sep-02/4:24 PM Reply
compact and clever
[8] dolores 29-Sep-02/11:30 AM Reply
I agree with Christof you need to get out more, strike a balance between talking to objects and talking to objectionable people
[9] heroditus 30-Sep-02/5:15 AM Reply
Not sure this works, prbably because the spring is no longer in
[10] alexander 1-Oct-02/5:11 AM Reply
nice ending
[6] hipster flare 8-Jan-03/9:44 AM Reply
at's almost sad, but the "spring has spring" soiunds cliche or sing-songy, taking away from a mood that might surface from underneath.