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Conversation with a Clock III (Haiku) by morffrom

No,your spring has sprung, you've come undone now I have, no one to talk to ..................

hipster flare 8-Jan-03/9:44 AM
at's almost sad, but the "spring has spring" soiunds cliche or sing-songy, taking away from a mood that might surface from underneath.




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