| Re: Mastermind by wOrnella Mutiw |
24-Jul-03/1:37 PM |
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Hi, my name is horus8, you must be, Stupid. It has been a pleasure, but in the end I believe we all know who the true mastermind was, and in the words of Alexander the Great " All that way for this <wipes his sword of blood>...Oh, well, I suppose We're rich now, let's eat."
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| Re: I have reinvented the haiku and made it my own, becoming the world's first haiku gangsta in the process so you all had better just get it over with and give this 'ku a big fat TEN? by bondjedi |
24-Jul-03/1:29 PM |
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| Re: I'm gonna fuck you! by King Abdullah I |
24-Jul-03/1:26 PM |
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This title will bring them in, to be sadly dissapointed, like I inevitably will be either way.
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| Re: a comment on ~~~ My Lament For Museheart ~~~ by JoyLuck |
24-Jul-03/12:55 PM |
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We hid it up your ass, how about bending over and given it back before we unload the gatlin gun on yo punk aise.
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| Re: Feasting Ouroboros by <~> |
24-Jul-03/12:49 PM |
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It's great, I'm just of the opinion Bangladesh is a shit hole. Both realistically and metaphorically. Perhaps Katmandu?
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| Re: a comment on Can you believe this piece of shit was #1? by horus8 |
24-Jul-03/12:41 PM |
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That doesn't matter, only that I can pay my little brother a buck to read this like Captain Kirk is what's truly important.
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| Re: I am the gayest by walrus8 |
23-Jul-03/12:05 AM |
Top twenty poems
poem style avg # authormissing timeFree verse 7.14 49Bill Z. BubBlue Sky Diner, Thursday NightFree verse 7.00 30<~>Gamma Ray MachineFree verse 6.97 40god'swifefixin' - a tale of woeFree verse 6.93 14hipster flareFalling AsleepLyric 6.88 14MiggyExtra Strength TylenolFree verse 6.86 35DurtKLInstructions to a SculptorFree verse 6.86 83ChristofBread & OrangesFree verse 6.84 37god'swifeI am the gayestOde 6.83 9-=Dark__Angel=-The BloodingFree verse 6.79 71Mr PigThe Wooden Armchair Of Similar DreamsFree verse 6.78 14CaducusThe Order Of ThingsFree verse 6.77 30Mr Pigi will not come to bangladeshFree verse 6.75 23lost in americaSome ThingsFree verse 6.75 10ChristofFamily PortraitFree verse 6.75 18Mr PigGoodbyeFree verse 6.75 18Sunshine ConkeyWatching My Childhood VanishFree verse 6.74 13CaducusDamaged By 'Weakness'Other 6.74 22Mr PigThe Last Words She SaidFree verse 6.73 56CaducusThe GentlemanFree verse 6.68 57-=Dark_Angel=-
And then some.
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| Re: The Call Of Cannons by SupremeDreamer |
23-Jul-03/12:02 AM |
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"The pedals of love" Best line ever! What a bike! Dark Bagel once said to me "You must be one of those uncompromising street poetes" You can have that title now. lol. I'm done with it. When i was in prison there was the guard that would wake us up in the middle of the night like it was an emergency... Then he would laugh and start flexing like a boddy building WWF steroid monkey. We called him the python man. What a waste of mashed potatos that bastard was. I never got any sleep.
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| Re: Tomorrow by jude |
22-Jul-03/11:55 PM |
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| Re: a comment on Can you believe this piece of shit was #1? by horus8 |
22-Jul-03/11:53 PM |
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| Re: a comment on Can you believe this piece of shit was #1? by horus8 |
22-Jul-03/11:51 PM |
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Sometimes, in life, you got to miss the boat, and walk. Worthy, or not. See, what's funny is my 'worthy' poems were zero'd to death, because, if you write a great poem on this sight people will avoid it or kill it anyway. Right, a shit poem about being gay, and tada, number 1. My best work was not apparently worthy either, so you tell me? What's worthy on poemranker Mr. Life raft? i've written a poem about everything except what is and what isn't worthy. ThaT'S IT! I'll write a poem about James Worthy.
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| Re: a comment on Border towns & the runs by horus8 |
22-Jul-03/9:44 PM |
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Yeah, me too, they need to be extinguished.
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| Re: the preacher and the poet by http://findingwater |
22-Jul-03/9:29 PM |
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The poet? Never, full of caviar maybe and themselves.
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| Re: first letter level by http://findingwater |
22-Jul-03/9:26 PM |
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| Re: Your Heart is my Heaven by Free2Rhyme15 |
22-Jul-03/9:06 PM |
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"diffcult" typo, and there are some gramatical errors. "she pasted away" this made me grin naturally. I'd fix that if I were you, but the sentiment felt honest and pure enough. 6.
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| Re: Halves by impert&ent |
22-Jul-03/9:02 PM |
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| Re: A Delicate Poem by EAger to Offend |
22-Jul-03/9:00 PM |
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| Re: education by richa |
22-Jul-03/8:51 PM |
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Superb, compressed, poignant.
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| Re: Spider by DreamerSupreme |
22-Jul-03/8:36 PM |
"Crossed arms, standing over the hallway
The angel cries, all it has tried
to make me see..To save me,
Failed".
Yes, very good. Find your subjects and explore them intigrating yourself, so it becomes organic and not self absorbed. I would suggest strengthening your vocabulary and grammar next, but you got the right idea. writing every day on poemranker will teach you that. 7.
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| Re: a comment on Yellow Star by Mr Pig |
22-Jul-03/8:24 PM |
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All very informative, true and lovely points.
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