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first letter level (Free verse) by http://findingwater
a wicked late night
in the mirror belie
my bleary eyes
i try to look inside
and see what the pupils hide
what hides is hidden and hid
and stopping my sight search i turn to my face
and notice the lines of gravitous time
what poor lighting was put in this room that shades
and shapes the pallid plane of my face
i take a step back into dim light and peer at
my profile which, with one eye pressed, now looks perfect
in the mirrors reflection
a wicked late night
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Arithmetic Mean: 6.0
Weighted score: 5.119203
Overall Rank: 5749
Posted: July 22, 2003 5:05 PM PDT; Last modified: July 22, 2003 5:05 PM PDT
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