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first letter level (Free verse) by http://findingwater
a wicked late night in the mirror belie my bleary eyes i try to look inside and see what the pupils hide what hides is hidden and hid and stopping my sight search i turn to my face and notice the lines of gravitous time what poor lighting was put in this room that shades and shapes the pallid plane of my face i take a step back into dim light and peer at my profile which, with one eye pressed, now looks perfect in the mirrors reflection a wicked late night

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.0
Weighted score: 5.119203
Overall Rank: 5748
Posted: July 22, 2003 5:05 PM PDT; Last modified: July 22, 2003 5:05 PM PDT
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[9] horus8 @ 24.126.113.154 | 22-Jul-03/9:26 PM | Reply
A superior piece.
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