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first letter level (Free verse) by http://findingwater

a wicked late night in the mirror belie my bleary eyes i try to look inside and see what the pupils hide what hides is hidden and hid and stopping my sight search i turn to my face and notice the lines of gravitous time what poor lighting was put in this room that shades and shapes the pallid plane of my face i take a step back into dim light and peer at my profile which, with one eye pressed, now looks perfect in the mirrors reflection a wicked late night

horus8 22-Jul-03/9:26 PM
A superior piece.




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