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I have reinvented the haiku and made it my own, becoming the world's first haiku gangsta in the process so you all had better just get it over with and give this 'ku a big fat TEN? (Haiku) by bondjedi won too tree for five
sicks seven ate niner ten
eleven twelve YEAH!!!!!!
Up the ladder:
Strays
Down the ladder:
Ode to the inafamous dark angel
Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
Arithmetic Mean: 3.6875
Posted: December 28, 2002 10:47 PM PST; Last modified: December 28, 2002 10:47 PM PSTWeighted score: 3.8439538 Overall Rank: 13471 Comments:
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nentwined @ 66.92.183.34
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29-Dec-02/2:23 AM
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that's pretty bad.
the best thing about this? the word 'ku. that is all. carry on
Aaarrgghh, my eyes, my beautiful eyes...
you better take some ku lessons from snoop, or me of course.
So you reinvented the Haiku? Trashed would
be closer to fact. At least you are limiting yourself to three lines.
Upon further reflection, I believe my words
were overly harsh. Some of your haikus are okay and you seem to have a knack for them. Why not try different subjects like nature, paradox or philosophy. You might surprise me and yourself. Good luck and sorry for the unwarranted comments though your comments on my poem were also unwarranted and juvenile.
Thrilling.
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