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I have reinvented the haiku and made it my own, becoming the world's first haiku gangsta in the process so you all had better just get it over with and give this 'ku a big fat TEN? (Haiku) by bondjedi

won too tree for five sicks seven ate niner ten eleven twelve YEAH!!!!!!

Quarton 7-Jan-03/6:22 PM
Upon further reflection, I believe my words
were overly harsh. Some of your haikus are
okay and you seem to have a knack for them.
Why not try different subjects like nature,
paradox or philosophy. You might surprise me
and yourself. Good luck and sorry for the
unwarranted comments though your comments on
my poem were also unwarranted and juvenile.




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