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neverland (Free verse) by crwncka1
in the darkness I sleep,
where i am not alone,
as my dreams take me,
to this place that is warm,
without care or worry I go,
resting away from the real,
other world that is cold,
but when not awake I feel,
inside that it should be real,
as across in this land of none,
hiding away like a stranger,
I hold on for dear life,
as the things I see,
feel so deeply real,
in this world I imagine,
that I hope one day to awake,
and it forever be my view,
of the world I live in
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Arithmetic Mean: 5.0
Weighted score: 5.0
Overall Rank: 7742
Posted: July 25, 2003 9:28 PM PDT; Last modified: July 25, 2003 9:28 PM PDT
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