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death of devil XIII

Member since 2003 · Posted 25 Jul 2003 · 4 comments

though the clear air I see, that now I have crossed over, between darkness and light, to fully become, aware of all things, that make up this, one life of mine, as my search has ended, nothing within left to see, and with that in mind, I must now finally embrace love, as it is all that remains left, for me on this perilous journey, that I have yet to experience, now that I have passed, though the seemly never ending, maze of sorrow and misery, only to find nothing, but a huge void of emptiness, that my soul yearns to fill, looking though to the other side, so with nothing else left to uncover, but the love that is promised to reveal, as the darkness is now lighted, giving me a deep sense of trust, felt slowly rising within, as I walk on toward the light, looking to give all my love inside, to this one girl I know, whom I truly love from the heart, and know better then anyone, that her and I truly deserve, to experience the wonderful feeling, that a love longed for would bring, and with nothing wrong or right, I now look for another chance, as I hear my heart screaming, that I must say true to it, as nothing else matters

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4 comments

[n/a] horus8 25-Jul-03/9:36 PM Reply
And to think my sherbert melted a bit to read this nonsense.
[n/a] crwncka1 › horus8 25-Jul-03/9:44 PM Reply
or did you weewee on it?
[8] penguin fiend › crwncka1 20-Jan-04/7:23 PM Reply
naaaah, in order for out friend to have weeweed on it he would have to have a penis, perhaps since he was eating it out of his moms ass it melted a bit
[n/a] Everyone › penguin fiend 21-Jan-04/5:23 AM Reply
What do you think is more funny: wee, or poo?