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soul mate (Free verse) by crwncka1
my soul is lost out there, as I felt death take it, my heart just could not handle, the pressure of love, that I grounded down, until nothing was left inside, but this feeling of emptiness, only my body is here now, as my soul has now escaped, my isolation from the world, and like magic my denial has, showed me the one way out, as it was sent across the way, to the only girl I ever loved, who vanished without a trace, our fears of love just to much, for both of us to handle, but make no mistake, the love felt was pure, so their is no escape, no more broken hearts

Up the ladder: death of devil XIII
Down the ladder: venus (revised)

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.0
Weighted score: 4.880797
Overall Rank: 10119
Posted: August 11, 2003 2:37 PM PDT; Last modified: August 11, 2003 2:37 PM PDT
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[n/a] crwncka1 @ 67.30.31.70 | 11-Aug-03/2:46 PM | Reply
hurry up and hate me now :D
[5] horus8 @ 24.126.113.154 > crwncka1 | 11-Aug-03/6:52 PM | Reply
I think I'd rather take my time.
[5] horus8 @ 24.126.113.154 | 11-Aug-03/6:51 PM | Reply
Yeah, well spare us the broken wind then.
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