poemranker ::soul mate by crwncka1

DetailsThe poem, its numbers, and the conversation.

Free verse № 60286

soul mate

Member since 2003 · Posted 11 Aug 2003 · 3 comments

my soul is lost out there, as I felt death take it, my heart just could not handle, the pressure of love, that I grounded down, until nothing was left inside, but this feeling of emptiness, only my body is here now, as my soul has now escaped, my isolation from the world, and like magic my denial has, showed me the one way out, as it was sent across the way, to the only girl I ever loved, who vanished without a trace, our fears of love just to much, for both of us to handle, but make no mistake, the love felt was pure, so their is no escape, no more broken hearts

Rate it

0 is the worst, 10 the best. Pick a number, add a comment if you like, then send it. Keys: 0–9 pick, Enter sends.

mean 4.00 weighted 4.88 rank 10103 views 138 View voting details →

4 votes so far. Yours would make 5.4 votes so far

3 comments

[n/a] crwncka1 11-Aug-03/2:46 PM Reply
hurry up and hate me now :D
[5] horus8 › crwncka1 11-Aug-03/6:52 PM Reply
I think I'd rather take my time.
[5] horus8 11-Aug-03/6:51 PM Reply
Yeah, well spare us the broken wind then.