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Friends I Miss You (Free verse) by Birdpia
Friends when you see rainbow, I am below the black clouds suffering loneliness But what could I do? Nothing but to go on as this is what I'm born as Friends when you are happy, I am silent in the corner of the crowded room But what could I do? Nothing but to go on as we're in different tracks Friends please forgive me Not that I was not willing to follow your road But when time goes on Everything will change And so do I Friends please forgive me Not that I was not willing to do what you want me to But when the sky is dark I am lost like a child in this jungle of loneliness Friends I appreciate your help But when you're tired, just leave me behind Because I'm not worth your hard sweat Friends when I'm left behind Please don't forget me Please make me your friend forever And so will I

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.0
Weighted score: 4.880797
Overall Rank: 10112
Posted: July 16, 2003 5:20 AM PDT; Last modified: July 16, 2003 5:20 AM PDT
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