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close to wonderland (Free verse) by crwncka1
though the floating glass that lifts,
up from the surface I see,
a mirror to the unknown,
where shadows may be seen,
reflecting back in full color,
for now I see though the darkness,
on to the world that exists,
where the sidewalk ends,
no longer will the unknown haunt me,
as today I have found the diamond,
that shows all sides of the picture,
that my eyes look into,
now my world may take the shape,
of this most elegant jewel I found,
as I pull it in for a closer look,
I see with my eyes fixed glaring,
though the light that casts down,
glimmering off each side appears,
a multiplex of beautiful color,
that create a gorgeous rainbow,
that my eyes follow straight ahead,
on toward the gold promised,
that lies just on the other side,
somewhere near the end of color
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Weighted score: 4.7615943
Overall Rank: 11607
Posted: July 25, 2003 9:29 PM PDT; Last modified: July 25, 2003 9:29 PM PDT
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