poemranker ::Wounds never to heal by Freethinker1602

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Free verse № 53041

Wounds never to heal

Member since 2003 · Posted 15 Jun 2003 · 3 comments

Some times you Want to say you're Sorry For the words You harshly spoke The words that Had to be said Because you Couldn't keep them Far enough from The tip of your Tongue How many people Can justify the Tears falling from A loved one's eye How many people Are stupid enough To believe that They will always be right How many more will never hear the words Of regret from The killer's mouth The words that help us heal The words that mean So much in the end Does it all even matter It all hurts And there is no band aid My heart bleads open For those that I hurt I'm sorry

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[5] DurtKL 15-Jun-03/11:05 PM Reply
I liked it until i got past halfway.
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 16-Jun-03/12:27 PM Reply
When I was halfway through reading your poeme I thought to myself 'I bet the last line of this poeme is "I'm sorry"'.
[n/a] horus8 16-Jun-03/1:46 PM Reply
I liked it up until my left hand turned into a radioactive porta potty and regurgitated blue curdled turds about my work space.