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Choices (Free verse) by INTRANSIT
Suckin' down favorite brewskis Playin' with the local floozies Hangin' with my closest crew and Wakin' up, covered in bruises.

Up the ladder: TBPOD Speaks
Down the ladder: To a bum,

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.142857
Weighted score: 5.03842
Overall Rank: 7199
Posted: July 27, 2003 10:02 AM PDT; Last modified: July 27, 2003 10:02 AM PDT
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Comments:
[n/a] god'swife @ 67.73.18.115 | 27-Jul-03/11:26 AM | Reply
It should read "bruisies"(justkidding)get rid of 'and' at the end of L3.
[7] horus8 @ 24.126.113.154 | 27-Jul-03/11:46 AM | Reply
Better than inside out underwear.
[6] Bill Z Bub @ 24.112.182.9 | 27-Jul-03/9:51 PM | Reply
Reminds me of last night, only without the floozies. Or the crew. Or the brewskis. Got the bruises though.
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