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Choices (Free verse) by INTRANSIT Suckin' down favorite brewskis
Playin' with the local floozies
Hangin' with my closest crew and
Wakin' up, covered in bruises.
Up the ladder:
TBPOD Speaks
Down the ladder:
To a bum,
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Posted: July 27, 2003 10:02 AM PDT; Last modified: July 27, 2003 10:02 AM PDTWeighted score: 5.03842 Overall Rank: 7202 Comments:
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god'swife @ 67.73.18.115
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27-Jul-03/11:26 AM
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It should read "bruisies"(justkidding)get rid of 'and' at the end of L3.
Better than inside out underwear.
Reminds me of last night, only without the floozies. Or the crew. Or the brewskis. Got the bruises though.
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