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Choices (Free verse) by INTRANSIT

Suckin' down favorite brewskis Playin' with the local floozies Hangin' with my closest crew and Wakin' up, covered in bruises.

god'swife 27-Jul-03/11:26 AM
It should read "bruisies"(justkidding)get rid of 'and' at the end of L3.




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