Re: scarred by TheVampireLeStan	24-Aug-02/5:59 PM
this is it!!!!!!!THIS IS IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1this is it1!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!i have found it ha! the worst poem in the existance of rock banging communication since the dawn of man and tongue clacking jubilation yes i win a prize and so does he lol!!!!!! i win a frontal lobatomy for even reading this(should have known by his subtle user name) and he wins the HORUS8 PRIZE OF DISTINCTION IN ALL THINGS UNDISTINCTIVE AND HORTICULTURALLY HOMOGENIZED YOU SIR.. win none other then the "NIPPle-leSS PLATINUM BOOB OF TIAMATS YOUNGER SISTERS GARDENERS ILLEGAL IMMIGRANT LOVER". be proud than ice pick your parents and yourself ..as soon as your scars heal of course(i'm not a complete chaotic evil trogyldite...i sir.am charismatically uncommited.
Re: red snow by sainthypro	24-Aug-02/5:50 PM
we'd be more fucked if there was a woman with you trust me...the future is indeed bleek if this ones a-sexual.. people...somebody fetch my blow-gun, before he runs away alas'....the laser sighted! not the hindu-succubus powered prat dispatcher! ye wretched imp (i will cane him later) 'fore i ream your arse with my long nail..1/10!
Re: The Ultimate~Creep goes to Mecca! by Bachus	24-Aug-02/3:47 PM
the style is "pro-se'o-me" with a bit of fantasy reality lisp..the mecca stuff is opium pipe dreams from a flat i lived in in detroit circa 1993 after i got out of the navy and was sculpting metal and painting and writing hence 'squating' (that's real) the somalian stuff of course true, the poetry parts glue it together and the ending naturally every boys nightmare pre-tru-love at sixteen (his dog's death mocked)...thank you for your fondness jade...you made bachus smile merlot fangs and oil his pan pipe....my dog was half wolf and labrador (black) his name was thor...this piece is for the lt. and my bestest pet..."for thor"...its "thor's belly dancing whore" may he rip. a-men...now sin sinners sin'e.........
Re: Adam by massakist666	24-Aug-02/3:25 PM
i wouldn't know mum' from adam, but i know shit from tit, and you my friend are both riding atop a bloating african rivered wilder beast carcuss...even the crocodiles are fleeing...look down see that...that's the 'hoof' of pan dancing 'pon your balet toes...you fail! reassurance is futile, resistance irrelevant.
Re: Cut by TheVampireLeStan	23-Aug-02/10:58 PM
dead..because i read...FUCK MY eyes....oh jesu..the cad has penised my eyes...drink urine from now on to properly operate your writing vehicle...JESUS FUCKING christ...replace every "cut" with "nun"...to better this skin rash...FUCK HAAAAAAAA!
Re: A prom that could never be by Eric Johnson	23-Aug-02/10:53 PM
you sir..need an overdose of swollen shaft...your chivalry is charasmatically uncomitted. i pray you knoch her up, and work in a factory until you lose your mind, then.....we can only hope have shakeb this preposterious pointless material...train wreck.2/10
Re: Sacrosanct Oligarch by Frass	23-Aug-02/10:48 PM
the title is perfect and then you started doing that crazy thing you do with your brain...thinking..think less, thinking has nothing to do with writing. it just gets in the way and complicates the simple(yime up while i squezze this pimple.there)..this poem looks like a steak cooking a cow..6/10
Re: Gilded Stumps of Olde (AN STORY THAT IS NOT AN POEME) by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.	23-Aug-02/3:21 PM
this is a glossary so fucking layered...unreal..it's the backstory of gilgamesh and a gay harry crumb...i drank upon my prawne all night, and indeede enbrowned my limp wrist and vomited through reddening fingers like a rainbird sprinkler...i fuckin love this and da...i want to rape his prawne and keelhaul myself gay blade drawn...the whole thing is just too fucking good...io have no more worde' to be so stiff' and create a new'''way of crushtations and nuding fuck...i personally i'm speechless and errot flynned right in the chamber of frocked cauliflower poop shooters ahoy...arhh 10/10/10/10!
Re: {Porn*Star}{Hai*kus} by horus8	23-Aug-02/2:58 PM
leos and scorpios get along actually very well and the sex is beyond measure usually on the scorpios part and inclination, but the relation ship can suffer greatly intellectually and in substance (layers) not always though, sometimes depending on retrogrades and environment that previously mentioned can get reversed....but mostly its the either...they're also both known to give each other space quite well and often, then at times explode in character to see one another at all costs regardless of who or what is in the way <sponsored by 'telepathy' the only way to communicate and 'mahdi' a fourteen year old messiah who controlled mecca for 200 days twenty years ago, he had blue eyes and was A HALF ARAB WESTERN BLOOD HYBRID!> i love that previos 20 button by the may kaolin fire rocks!!!!
Re: Dignity by kthulah	23-Aug-02/1:24 PM
this has the reek of a sraight edge smile.....i like it...it's swell. 8/10!.
Re: love song by <~>	22-Aug-02/9:06 PM
by the way i was wrong it was his 27th symphony in G, and you're probably a gemini...that dark angel story is fucking priceless huh...he's a she's a something ori-gi-nal...so sayith the priest!
Re: {Porn*Star}{Hai*kus} by horus8	22-Aug-02/9:01 PM
why are you a aquarius? i would of wagered....aries or sagitarius, or taurus or a scorpio, perchance virgo, but not an aquarius? right?!
Re: {Porn*Star}{Hai*kus} by horus8	22-Aug-02/7:11 PM
i don't know mrs. god? they make me feel so dirty and rushed..i have to scrub now...my shaft has been barnacled, and i,ve also sprung a leak...o
Re: Awesome Heir by Shin-Bojangles	22-Aug-02/2:25 PM
da. i'm leaving a vote and comment on this tarts fertile land for you referring to your latest epic sir choadk and such here it is, for some reason i couldn't leave it at the story, and it gobbled up my first brilliant comment, but i gave it a 10/10..it was delicious i wrote a brilliant comment for this da but the site red lined it..fuck...this is a work of staggering genius...i laughed for a fucking hour..sheer mastery..stupid enbrowned prawn operated (should keel haul a prawn for nudity in the next one) redlined computer errors any way you win the HORUS8 SHORT STORY OF ERROT FLYNNISM and chamber music madness...i had more fun reading this than anything in two months...you sir are dastardly and without limits! 10/10!s
Re: Bad habits & tramps by horus8	22-Aug-02/1:13 PM
i have been feeling just a bit driven..i gotta go read d.a's new cataract....i heard its baconish, or should i say beakish (beakinism the study of mr. bacon...thanks z..i'll chat when i'm done reading...i need a littla d.a in the morning...or should i say late..late..morning.what? i'm a writer not a morning person.....drone.gone.hone.scone.trumpet death ray!!!.
Re: Crimson Diaries by Jsylum	22-Aug-02/2:12 AM
i haven't had one since prom night.....
Re: Ring Toss by Shin-Bojangles	22-Aug-02/2:10 AM
i hope a clan of hobgoblins sets up shop in your arse!...you hobbit loving soccer junkies!
Re: would i be considered crazy by silvertongueddevil	22-Aug-02/2:02 AM
some guys have all the luck....we can only hope he's not a diabetic, or sickle cell anemic...8/10
Re: Waltz by unknown	22-Aug-02/12:33 AM
even my herpes are wretching frightened running away from that mouth and that danct...to vague...lacking that wich makes vague compact poetry acute...you sir should obelisk squat immediately..
Re: Awesome Heir by Shin-Bojangles	21-Aug-02/3:16 PM
geez people...it's the orc who died not our ability to be heavy handed wit spilling creationalists! can't we all just get a thong...then dance for monopoly money and beernuts...love thy neighbors...man, woman, dwarf, orc, black, white,fat, slight,philopino, and or dog eating ass wipes...hug eachother...smile more...what the hell lets twelve step ourselves back to that happy place in our minds...then...ATTACK! ATTACK! DIE TALENTLESS CADS! YOU ARE ALL UNWORTHY....bow to the toe nailed vulva...yes bow to the cat gut sewn polish rectum....bobby pin the scrotum...then tell me again how much you love me....there..i feel better!..how about you all?