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Free verse № 3186

Crimson Diaries

Member since 2002 · Posted 5 Jul 2002 · 3 comments

The cherries are speaking to me Here, unsuppressed by summer heat I know the redness as a sign of pain, Tart and sweet in its own sunburnt cheeks, Some grinning in the shade Auburn and split, some deeply glowing, Sighing with the wind Unaware of any other, but the other half, Through the sunsets and the rain. I see my reflection on its surface, An exaggeration of my outstretched hand, And then the cherries spoke no more, As crimson silence swept the land.

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[8] nentwined 5-Jul-02/10:22 AM Reply
the end lines made me laugh out loud and definitely made the poem for me -- I wasn't really into it until then -- I stumbled through lines 3-9.
[7] -=SeTTle=- 29-Jul-02/9:55 PM Reply
precious, not too pretty...hmm...hard decision..pretty good....quite a cut above...yet it doesn't do much for me. Perhaps I should write a poem about how I feel.
[4] horus8 22-Aug-02/2:12 AM Reply
i haven't had one since prom night.....