Your judge is you

Member since 2002 · Posted 27 Jun 2002 · 2 comments

You may act You may lie You may pretend You may feign. You may reason well all your motives You may find excuses for your prerogatives You may keep in check your true views You may paint on them all the false hues. You may hide your defeats You may brag your triumphs You may strive to build your image You may crave to get around your message. But like you stand naked Atleast for few minutes For your bath daily, You cant hide From the glory of truth Your vices and falsehoods bare all Your own truth For your judge is you.

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[4] nentwined 27-Jun-02/2:49 PM Reply

a good point, but I couldn't get into the feel of the piece.

[0] poetandknowit 6-Sep-02/10:41 AM Reply

This poem really says nothing. If there are any specifics, they are lost in the style. Why not "you may" all the way. I was sad to see it stop.