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Your judge is you (Free verse) by dilips_10 You may act
You may lie
You may pretend
You may feign.
You may reason well all your motives
You may find excuses for your prerogatives
You may keep in check your true views
You may paint on them all the false hues.
You may hide your defeats
You may brag your triumphs
You may strive to build your image
You may crave to get around your message.
But like you stand naked
Atleast for few minutes
For your bath daily,
You cant hide
From the glory of truth
Your vices and falsehoods bare all
Your own truth
For your judge is you.
Up the ladder:
The Thirteenth Loser
Down the ladder:
Crimson Diaries
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Posted: June 27, 2002 1:43 PM PDT; Last modified: June 27, 2002 1:43 PM PDTWeighted score: 4.9 Overall Rank: 9856 Comments:
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nentwined @ 66.92.183.34
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27-Jun-02/2:49 PM
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a good point, but I couldn't get into the feel of the piece.
This poem really says nothing. If there are any specifics, they are lost in the style. Why not "you may" all the way. I was sad to see it stop.
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