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Your judge is you (Free verse) by dilips_10

You may act You may lie You may pretend You may feign. You may reason well all your motives You may find excuses for your prerogatives You may keep in check your true views You may paint on them all the false hues. You may hide your defeats You may brag your triumphs You may strive to build your image You may crave to get around your message. But like you stand naked Atleast for few minutes For your bath daily, You cant hide From the glory of truth Your vices and falsehoods bare all Your own truth For your judge is you.

nentwined 27-Jun-02/2:49 PM
a good point, but I couldn't get into the feel of the piece.




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