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The Thirteenth Loser (Free verse) by seebergerb
When are tears not real?
When you cried for the love you lost
while dancing on a cloud without
touching the ground - when you held
dice between your fingertips and prayed
for the heavens to bow to you - when
you ran across the earth, your sweat
forming rivers as wide as a rainbow,
for the love you thought belonged to you
if you tried hard enough -
the sirens at the end of the rainbow
wield long teeth, sharp as a cut axe,
wings ash-colored and eyes as empty as space.
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Arithmetic Mean: 4.8
Weighted score: 4.9
Overall Rank: 9860
Posted: May 27, 2002 7:43 PM PDT; Last modified: May 27, 2002 7:43 PM PDT
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