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Waltz (Free verse) by Tchur Fingers clutching, dancing in soft candlelight
Flutters of nails over white skin
Muted words left unspoken
Thoughts locked in closed eyes
Silver shadows reaching, melting
Satin cheeks reflected
Mirrored pools of lucid light
Lips reaching
The touch of a red tongue.
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Posted: August 21, 2002 8:44 PM PDT; Last modified: August 21, 2002 8:44 PM PDTWeighted score: 4.672192 Overall Rank: 12190 Comments:
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horus8 @ 24.126.113.154
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22-Aug-02/12:33 AM
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even my herpes are wretching frightened running away from that mouth and that danct...to vague...lacking that wich makes vague compact poetry acute...you sir should obelisk squat immediately..
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