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... (Free verse) by logun2002ya
have you ever awoke from a dream
to find you still could feel,
everything you felt while asleep
still, somehow, feels real?
this eye feel
each day when eye wake.
eye see what eye saw,
the visions eye create,
the words eye speak,
the feelings eye 'd feel,
the thoughts eye thought,
am eye dreaming still?
eye pinch, but do not wake.
yet eye feel, so eye am not fake.
eye hold the pen with touch
so eye write what, from dreams, eye take.
can this be?
am eye me?
or just a figment of a man
eye long to be?
the only diffrence eye see
from reality to a dream,
is how eye feel on time
somehow, in sleep, ceases to be...
yet in the darkness
there's still light to see,
is it your light
reflecting off me?
or is it mine
suspended in space,
holding my place
on your perfect face?
eye don't know,
and eye don't care...
if only you where here
instead of in there.
till dreams are truth
love as youth
from me
dream
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Posted: November 13, 2002 6:48 PM PST; Last modified: November 13, 2002 6:48 PM PST
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