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I Hear My Name Called Again and Again (Free verse) by abbaslittleclingon
I hear my name called again and again
by one maybe two or three
beckoning persistently,gentle breeze unfeinged
soothing me
the waves alsso at shore join the calls
pleading and crying
creating an ache to penetrate walls
sweet,urgent,searing
disolving my will and body of substance
as I follow
the sound of hope in the distance
becoming hollow
I search and search and weep
for the unsearchable
tired and drained I long for leep
now irristable
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Arithmetic Mean: 2.25
Weighted score: 4.672192
Overall Rank: 12197
Posted: November 17, 2002 4:54 PM PST; Last modified: November 17, 2002 4:54 PM PST
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You must feel incredibly jealous of my work to be always attacking it so viciously.